Arthuria99's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Epic Battle Fantasy]

Impressive!

First of all, i must praise and congrate you for this game, they are awesome
I do believe that this game deserved more than 3th Weekly winner
this game even deserved to get an nomination in the best game of the year in 2009
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Good Things :
-Graphic and the animation of this game was perfect, they are move smoothly
-Music and Sound Effects was really suits in the game, and that make the gamer addicted by this game
-Cool Skill and Awesome Summoning skill animation, especially in catashtrope skill, I realize that you draw them in another software and then export it to flash
that's the reason, why this game will never run slowly
-Cool Character design, and great gallery art
-Fan Service = Boobies, almost every japanesse game/anime have this thing
I'm glad that you have include them in your game
- Awesome Background Design, they are beautiful
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Bad Things :
-Maybe i have said that the music was really suit in the game, but it also have the low quality in the sametime, you must increase the music "Bit rate"
when publish it into .SWF file, or using a good compressing audio software such as Audacity to do this stuff, so you can get a good quality music with less music size
-I don't know if it was a glitch or not, but when our player got an"poison" status
then another monster attack him/her with another "poison causing" skill
the player will receive more damage from its poison effect than before
-Decrease the rate of goku spirit bomb, coz he can use it continuesly in each turn and make this game pretty difficult
-There's no storyline, and you make an "pirate" character instead of the ussual RPG game character such as "Swordman/Knight" or "Fighter"
- There's no checkpoint, and when you die by an accident( carelessly push the wrong skill) It's over for us, and that's mean that we must waste another time to beat this game
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Improvisation :
-Add more skill, and character or perhaps add more skill for enemies
-Make a storyline and start make your own RPG game series, i do believe they're will success in the future
-Make more status effect, such as "Stunned" "Chaos" or "Freeze"
-Make an RPG game that make us can explore the town, and leveling up our character
-Add an save system/Checkpoint
-All of your character are pretty well designed, but i do believe you can make the prettier mage, and cooler character than the "Pirate" character
-Add some misc sounds for each character, for example when they are going to use some skill or getting hit by enemies, make them shout "Argh!" "No!"
"Take This" ,or something like that
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OVERALL SCORE :
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Graphic : 10/10
Design = 9/10
Gameplay = 10/10
Idea = 8/10
Animation = 10/10
Backgrounds = 8/10
Music =7/10
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[Stickya Adventurya]

Terrible Game

Good things :
-This game was fun in some parts, aside of that, this game also have a humour sense to make the gamer giggle sometime,
-music choice is quite dull but it's really suit for this game since the main character alone is just an dummy stick
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Bad Things :
-This game don't have any replay or restart button, so we have no other choice but to close the game if we fail to get that "You must be cheating" medal
-The main character is so uncool, and this game graphic is kinda gimcrack
-Some parts are insane, and really hard to do, for exampe; the level with bouncy balls and floating balls
-There's a glitch that make the character can die continuosly when it falls to cliff
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Improvitation :
-Make restart button
-I know stickya is just a stick, but i believe u can make him cooler than that
-Life point and death counter
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Overall score :
-Graphic = 4/10
-Idea = 6/10
-Music = 7/10
-Bug = 4/10
-Gameplay = 7/10

[Fear Unlimited Issue2]

I'm terribly Sorry

1)Postive Thought
The graphic of this game area good, even the music and sound effect
the background was quite ok, i bet the gameplay is good if u can fixed "tons" of bug in this game
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2)Negative Thought
-There are tons of bugs in this game, if i must write each bug in this game
they are unlimited, just like the title of this game
i believe one review isn't enough to mention all bugs in this game
-when character get hit by enemy, why the hell he must sprawl that long
is he sleeping? or fainted, unless u press some key, ur player is on that position forever
-Enemy movement is like a retarded
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3)Improvisation
i'm ussualy told something on my review so the author can improve something in their future game but this time, i only told u this one;
Seriously! just fix the bug already, this game is the one with medals system right?, i heard from another user, even u make a bug with a medal, so player can't get it
If u're not going to fix it, at least u must delete the medal system
how the hell we can beat the medal? even the gameplay of this game is already poluted by tons of bug, did u check this game before even submit it in NG?
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Overall Score :
-Graphic = 8/10
-Animation = 6/10
-Background = 7/10
-Music = 7/10
-Original = 3/10
-Sound Effect = 7/10
-Gameplay = 4/10
-Bug = 1/10

[Foreign Creature]

A very good game

1) Positive Thought
I never thought "point and click" game would be this epic
the graphic was superb,even the animation
concept for the game is also great
its also great that u can make TAB button useless, so player can't cheat in this game
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2) Negative Thought
I just don't like the music it wasn't suit for a game like this why?
its not bring such atmosphere for a gamer to feel serious for this game
but that's not a big problem, really.
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3) Improvisation
next time maybe u could add some timer, coz this game is quite easy
and perhaps some people think its boring, the fact it's a great game
or maybe a password system
so gamer can play each stage they want
its still a great game though
i'd like to give u point more than 10, since u're indonesian just like me
but i can't^^
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4) Overall Score :

Animation = 10/10
Graphic = 10/10
Bug = 10/10( until now, i don't find any bug)
Concept = 10/10
Music = 7/10
Sound Effect = 8/10
Background = 9/10
GamePlay = 10/10
Original = 7/10( There's already tons of game like this )

belugerin responds:

Thank you for review! about the timer hope at the next sequels.

[Alkie Kong 2]

Pretty good game

1) First of all, i must congrate u for this game, this game was awesome
it have a good graphic,cool background and some improvisation and idea from the old and boring donkey kong game into such a cool action game,
sound effect and misc sound is quite good, except for max of course
his voice style is quite dull and annoy some people, even me
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2) Second thing, each stage always have a same music all time, except in boss level (even every boss level had a same music) u must make a different music in each stage, man,coz some people thinkmusic is what make a game/movie worth playing
in fact they even give a good review score in spam movie for the music
and said "i give u 5 coz i like the music"
as for final boss, make the music feel dramatic or at least can make people feel that they are actually fight against the final enemies in the game
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3) Third reason, why people rate this game so badly while this game is actually a great game;
- u can't kill molty, and they are everywhere
-some people think beat the game without dying and getting hurt by bats is quite hard
- even though you killed the bat, but they keep spawning over and over again in a short distance
- restart button, ok this is the most important thing that u must improve.
why? most likely people trying to get the beat the boss level without taking any damage since most people already got the password things from game guide and stuff, sometimes they are failed while trying beat that medal, and get hurt by molty or by alkie himself, without restart button, they must killing their self and try again and again, it make some people depressed(even me)
- the last boss hand is too wide, sometimes i get hurt by them, while trying to get back to floor
- even though the final boss is not supposed to squeeze you, but he still can destroy the wood box
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4)Finally, i gonna told u something that u must improve since there's so many people ou there keep voting this game so badly just because they can't beat the medal
- make molty beat-able
- bats don't spawning after we killed them, coz it's quite hard to beat "beat the game without getting hit by bats"
-restart button to replay/retry each level automaticly, it's quite annoying to kill ourself if we failed
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Overall Score :
-Graphic = 10/10
-Background = 10/10
-Music = 7/10
-Gameplay = 8/10
-Concept = 9/10
-SFX/Misc = 8/10
- Idea = 10/10

Note : I'm still vote for 5 on this game

[Gangster Bros. 1.1]

Good Game

I see u do alot of improvisation since the first version
well, it's so great, u add some music and sound effect
i became addicted to this game since the first version
password:
level 1 = jungle
level 2 = sewer
level 3 = shop
level 4 = mountain
level 5 = forest
level 6 = beach
level 7 = courtyard
level 8 = castle
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other password :
- godmario
- duckhunt
- getalife
- credits
- boss

[Thing-Thing Arena 3]

A very good game

The graphics are awesome, sound effect was really suit in the game.
the detail effect seems great, (including; scorched wall, blood, and hole in the wall, maybe u could add some nice music in this game
coz they're quite sucks
this game is almost flawless, if only some bug can be fixed, first:
-u must die first after u completed one of accievements,
otherwise ur acchievement will not counted in game,
if you don't do that u must restart all achievement to unlock artifact19
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some improvisation for the next thing arena game :
-make the reload item spawn faster than before
-multiplayer
-recovery item
-shield
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Overall score :

-Gameplay = 10/10
-Graphic = 10/10
-Effect = 10/10
-Sound Effect = 10/10
-Music = 7/10
-Bug = 6/10
-Background = 10/10
-Concept = 10/10
-Original = 8/10

note: i'm still vote 5

[stickBRAWLER]

Very Good!

gameplay is really great, the graphic and background was ok
i never thought such a stick game become so epic
anyway, good job

[My first Flash game :D]

Not bad for ur first

graphic and game control was good, but this game run too slowly sometimes.
to think that this game is still ur first, i bet ur future flash will be so damn great,
u need some work in character design and background, u must make it cooler or at least can make people think this game worth playing
still good game i suppose

[Portal Defenders]

Can't Stop Playing it!!!

Graphic,gameplay,comcept,sound effect and music are perfect and suit together.
first time i'm playing this game, i tought i was going to fight all spammer group
not only KK, but also FF,PP,FFF,DD and the others
the only problem is ; sometimes when u will lost ur acchievement
and must restart the quest to get it back.
some bug in this game :
-u can't get out from wadolf lazor attack
(dun know why, but this also happened in the last luis and bomtons game
"caste crashing th beard")
-when u control bob, u can't get out if zombie madness start attacking you
-acchievement medal, i lost my Zamboni medal forever, and i can't get it back

Gameplay = 10/10
Concept = 10/10
Graphic = 10/10
Sound Effect = 10
Bug = 8/10
Music = 9/10

Overall Score = 9.5
(note: but i still vote 5 on this game^^)
anyway awesome job luis and bomtons, this game deserved to get
"the best game of the year in 2009"